The Harbour
Hello,
I wrote this piece at school for some coursework, about a day spent in a harbour incorporating certain English language rules, metaphors and similies.
The fisherman return from another night of cold, hard labour, tired like the very harbour into which they arrive. Their weary bodies cold as their catch laying bleary eyed in the refrigerated compartment in the boat. Small waves break on the weathered harbour wall, similar to the rhythmic chug of the old fishing boat. The sun just managing to creep up over the horizon from the deep slumber that was night. Upon their arrival on the beach, within only a few minutes the fishermen have counted and sorted the fish and washed down their boats of the diesel spills, oil and fish remains.
Only a few hours pass before the sun starts to blossom in the sky like a flower in bloom, the rays of light fanning out like the petals. The early-morning light reflecting off the glistening ocean. Builders have already been busy for a couple of hours, sweating under the relentless African sun. The sound of the bricks being slapped onto fresh cement at odds with the melodic sound of the waves as they arrive and recede on the beach.
Like every other day, from mid-morning this popular piece of real estate gets lost under the mob of food sellers, tourists and the few locals that venture out after the fishermen have sold their earlier catch. The fisherman’s fresh catch mostly now sold and beautifully prepared, adorns the plates within many of the restaurants along the most popular stretch of boulevard.
The fishermen who sold their catch for just a few Rands only hours ago, have now retired to their modest backstreet homes. The same fish now selling for hundreds in the most lavish hotels. The old, inexpensive fishermen homes worn down by the great many that have walked in each others footsteps.
A distinctive new aroma emerges from the bustling harbour. The smell of oil and fish from the fishing boats which are now being prepared for their early start the next day, drifts along the beach. As the morning matures into afternoon, the sound of people’s chatter, cars and boats making their way up and down the coastline adds to the commotion.
Thanks for reading and if you’ve got any commemnts, thoughts or suggestions tell us!